Sunday, June 26, 2011

46 & 2 Issue One

The Tattoo
46&2 Issue 1
Writer Zachary Smith

PAGE 1.  PANEL 1.

Chino is asleep on a bed.

Myung (off panel): “Wake up Fei.  Don’t you have stuff to do today?”

PAGE 1.  PANEL 2.

Chino sits up in bed, a shirt is being thrown at him.

Chino:  “Yeah, tattoo at Stephan’s.  You’re working right?”

Myung (off panel):  “Of course, it is a weekday.  It’s not as easy as picking up some table scraps and throwing them away.”

PAGE 1.  PANEL 3.

Chino is putting the shirt on.

Chino:  “Hey!  I’m a busser, it’s more difficult than that.”

Myung (off panel):  “Just teasing.  I know you provide the whole entertainment budget, and you’re paying for school.”

Chino:  “Thanks.  Myung?  Favor?”

Myung (off panel):  “What?”

PAGE 1.  PANEL 4.

Chino walks into the bathroom, we still don’t see Myung yet.

Chino:  “We’re having our meeting with the Rev tonight, and I don’t think I’ll be able to drive anywhere after.”

Myung:  “I wouldn’t want you driving around in that death trap sober.”

PAGE 1.  PANEL 5.

Chino looks down.  We only see the back of Myung’s head.

Chino:  “That’s my baby.”

Myung:  “Take a joke.  I’ll be there.”

PAGE 2.  SPLASH PAGE.

Chino lays on the ground in Steph’s garage, shirtless, Ben Davis pants and converse on.  He is in the shape of the Hangman, meaning sacrifice to attain knowledge.  His legs and arms are basically the same as the Hangman tarot card.  His left leg is underneath him, and have his hands on top of his stomach instead of underneath, it would just seem more natural that way, maybe have the hands folded.  There is an ashtray and cigarette in view.  A few comics lay around on the floor.  A few stereo blares out music, with a TOOL CD case laying next to it, along with Deftones, Rage Against The Machine (First album, I want that image of the monk on fire, similar to the hangman, pain equaling knowledge).  Off panel is Steph prepping his tattoo machine.

Caption: “Blackfield, California.”

Steph:  “You ready Chino?”

PAGE 3.  PANEL 1.

Steph has a cloth and rubbing alcohol. That he is looking at as he stands over Chino.

PAGE 3.  PANEL 2.

Chino is standing taking a drag off a cigarette.

Chino:  “Yea.”

PAGE 3.  PANEL 3.

Steph applies the wipe to his arm.

Steph:  “You know what they say about choosing names in magic?”

PAGE 3.  PANEL 4.

Steph has pulled away, we seen a clean shaven part on Chino’s arm. 

Chino:  “Be careful what you choose.”

Steph: “I think this may apply to symbols as well.”

PAGE 3.  PANEL 5.

Steph is holding a drawing of the Flash symbol.

Chino:  “I’m not getting the Weltall symbol I made tattooed.”

Steph:  “Just as long as I’m not held responsible.”

Chino:  “Are you kidding?  I’d thank you for opening up the door to some crazy shit.”

PAGE 4.  PANEL 1.

Chino sits in a chair, Steph is applying the drawing to Chino’s arm.

Chino:  “Speaking of weird shit, can you give me back those Flex Mentallos?  Abe Frankie wants to borrow ‘em.”

Steph:  “No problem.”

PAGE 4.  PANEL 2.

Steph has pulled the paper away from Chino’s arm, Chino is taking a drag off of his cigarette.

PAGE 4.  PANEL 3.

Steph has rubber gloves on, and has begun tattooing Chino’s arm. 

Steph:  “I can’t believe you actually waited ‘til you were eighteen to get a tattoo.”

Chino:  “At least I was smoking before the legal age.”

PAGE 4.  PANEL 4.

Chino winces as Steph cleans the blood from his arm.

Chino:  “How long will this take to heal?”

Steph:  “Since its just an outline, it should only be a few days to a week.”

Steph:  “When are you going to Coachella?”

Chino: “A week.”

PAGE 4.  PANEL 5.

Tight shot of the symbol on Chino’s arm.

Steph OFF PNL: “Should be just fine.  Keep it covered, no tank tops.”

Chino OFF PNL:  “I’m going to be so high Myung’ll be lucky if I stay clothed.”

PAGE 4.  PANEL 6. 

Steph looks at the tattoo.

Steph:  “Shit, that stuff looks healed already.”

Chino:  “Um…I heal fast.”

PAGE 5.  PANEL 1.

Chino is at home, reading a magazine in his bedroom with a tank top on.  The magazines name is TRYSTEROS.    His watch beeper goes off.

PAGE 5.  PANEL 2.

Chino is making a sandwich and has put a chip bag on a paper plate.

PAGE 5.  PANEL 3.

Chino is watching television.  His cell phone rings.  Generic flip phone.

PAGE 5.  PANEL 4.

Chino answers the phone after looking at the ID on the screen, it says Grandma.

Chino:  “Hello.”

Grandma (through the phone): “Is your mom home?”

Chino: “I don’t think so.”

PAGE 5.  PANEL 5.

Chino looks at his watch on his left hand.  It reads 7:00 p.m.

Grandma (through the phone):  “Have you eaten?”

Chino:  “Doing so as we speak.  Well…not literally.”

Grandma (through the phone):  “Has you’re other family heard from your dad?”


PAGE 6.  PANEL 1.

Chino has walked outside, into his front yard. 

Chino:  “Not for a while.”

Grandma (through the phone):  “The job going okay?”

Chino:  “Yeah, lot’s of tips for a busser.”

PAGE 6.  PANEL 2.

Chino lights a cigarette.

Grandma (through the phone): “What was that sound?”   

Chino:  “Don’t know.  Listen grandma, I gotta get ready to go out, I’m headin over to Abe and Frankie’s.”

Grandma (through the phone):  “Fine, fine, kick me off the line.  Love you.”

Chino: “Love you too.”

PAGE 6.  PANEL 3.

Chino drops the cigarette into the gutter.

PAGE 6.  PANEL 4.

Chino gets into his car.  His car is an old beat down car.

PAGE 6.  PANEL 5.

Chino is getting out of his car at an apartment.  It is dark outside.


PAGE 7.  PANEL 1.

Abe opens the door for Chino.  Abe is skinny white kids, with long hair and jeans and a flannel, like an early 90’s grunge rocker. 

Chino: “Hey Abe.”

PAGE 7.  PANEL 2.

Chino, Abe, and Frankie sit around a table in the middle of the room.  Frank is a bigger Hispanic fellow, often wears a ball cap, Dickies shorts, black shirt, white socks, and Converse or Vans.  Magazines lie on the table, the same TRYSTERO magazines.  They are smoking pot. 

PAGE 7.  PANEL 3.

Chino is exhaling smoke, and holding up the latest TRYSTERO magazine. 

Chino:  “Did you read this issue  Frankie?  This is some fucked up shit.  He reported on the Lucifer project, which is really crazy.”

PAGE 7.  PANEL 4.

Abe is taking the joint from Chino, have Chino’s hand breaking in from the other panel.

Abe:  “Are they trying to raise the devil?”

PAGE 7.  PANEL 5.

Frankie is ashing the joint. 

Frank:  “Cause a big as explosion with Jupiter’s gasses, and it becomes a second sun.”

PAGE 7.  PANEL 6.

Chino lets the joint sit in the ash tray, and thinks about that statement for a while. 

Abe:  “Why?”

Chino:  “Create a second sun, and then colonize the planetoids around it, as like a way station.”

Abe:  “I don’t know about that.”


PAGE 8.  PANEL 1.

Frankie is driving, Abe is in the passenger seat and Chino is in the middle back seat, smoking a cigarette.

Frank:  “Did you read that one on the psychics disappearing?”

Chino:  “Yeah.  Kinda weird.  The messed up part is that they’re all around our age.”

PAGE 8.  PANEL 2.

They stand outside of a church, smoking cigarettes, and playing hackey sack under a street light.

Abe:  “I skimmed that one on the burnt up dude.  That was crazy.  No way that shit’s real, that’s some Punisher level shit.”

PAGE 8.  PANEL 3.

A man walks out of the shadows, with a lit cigarette.  He is dressed as a preacher, with a reverends collar.  He has blue jeans, a black leather jacket, and brown cowboy boots. 
This is Joshua Connor.  Should just be an altered version of Jesse Custer, from PREACHER. 

Joshua Connor: “What are you boys doing?”

PAGE 8.  PANEL 4.

The Burning Man walks down the street in a black trench coat, and a black hat baseball hat, black jack boots. 

Caption: Baltimore, Maryland.

Joshua Connor (Caption):  “Don’t you know it’s dangerous on the streets at night.”


PAGE 9.  PANEL 1.

A young African American male stands on a corner, timbaland boots, baggy pants, and a do-rag, extra large/long t-shirt.

Young man:  “Yo man, I got your stuff.  W.M.D.’s.  Nigga’s down the way got garbage.”

PAGE 9.  PANEL 2.

The Burning Man stops in front of the dealer.

Young man:  “What you want, I got it.”

PAGE 9.  PANEL 3.

A burst of brain splatter comes out of his head.

PAGE 9.  PANEL 4.

The burning man picks up the shell from the ground.

PAGE 9.  PANEL 5.

The Burning Man continues to walk on. 

Joshua Connor (Caption): “You could get hurt out here.”


PAGE 10.  PANEL 1.

Chino, Abe, and Frank look at Josh, the hacky sack hits the ground. 

Joshua:  “Get inside, I’ve got a twelve pack left.”

PAGE 10.  PANEL 2.

The four gentlemen are sitting around a table and drinking the beer. 

Chino:  “Where are Stephan and Chi?”

Frank:  “They’ll be here in a few.”

Abe:  “Speaking of Stephan, let’s see the ink.”

PAGE 10.  PANEL 3.

Chino rolls up his sleeve, the tattoo is covered in saran rap.

Joshua:  “Why a lighting bolt?”

Chino:  “It’s the Flash symbol, you know, the superhero.”

PAGE 10.  PANEL 4.

Joshua cracks open another beer.

Joshua:  “Bleh, I hate superheroes.”

Abe:  “Come on Reverand Connor, you can’t hate superheroes.”

PAGE 10.  PANEL 5.

Joshua laughs.  The boys are all looking at him.

Joshua:  “Boys, I grew up in Ireland, we have different comics, like Judge Dredd.  ‘Sides, it’s just so horribly unrealistic, spandex wearing poofs who never get older and always save the day.”

Frank:  “Except in Watchmen, right?”

Joshua:  “Aye, now there’s a proper book.”


PAGE 11.  PANEL 1.

Chino looks at his tattoo.

Chino:  “I like the Flash.  He’s a good guy, and he’s got the coolest power in the world.  Faster than hell, and he can go wherever he wants.  Literally run between dimensions.”

Abe:  “I’d want to be invisible, so…”

Frank:  “We know, but there are laws against stalking.”

Abe:  “But I’m not stalking if they don’t know I’m there.”

PAGE 11.  PANEL 2.

Joshua smacks Abe on the backside of the head.

Joshua:  “Abraham, you are a right nasty one.  Can’t be doin that stuff, even if you did have that power.  ‘Gotta be one of the good guys,’ right boys?”

Chino:  “Yeah, ‘cus there’s way too many of the bad ones.’” 

PAGE 11.  PANEL 3.

Joshua musses Chino’s hair.

Joshua:  “Taught you well.  Frank, did you ask Chino?”

Frank:  “Do you want me to set your tattoo?”

Chino:  “Set it?”

Frank:  “Make it permanent?”

PAGE 11.  PANEL 4.

Chino lights another cigarette.

Chino: “What?  Well yea I—“

PAGE 11.  PANEL 5.

Frank hits Chino right on his tattoo.

Frank:  “Okay.”

PAGE 11.  PANEL 6.

Chino is standing, stamping his feet, everyone else is laughing.

Chino:  “FUCK, FUCK, FUCK, FUCK, FUCK.  I DIDN’T SAY YES.”


PAGE 12.  PANEL 1.

There is a knock at the door, Joshua is already standing to answer it.  Chino is holding his arm.

Abe:  “You said yea.”

Chino:  “He didn’t let me finish, fuck.  I was going to say “Well yea, but it’s permanent already.”  Dick.”

PAGE 12.  PANEL 2.

Steph and Chi walk into the room.  Chino is giving Frank the stink eye.  Joshua and Abe light up a cigarette. 

Chi:  “Frank, did you ask—“

Chino:  “Yeah he fucking asked me.”

Joshua:  “Take a seat boys.”

PAGE 12.  PANEL 3.

Everyone is now sitting down at the table.

Joshua:  “So, who is going to share tonight?  Chino?”

Chino:  “Um, I don’t think I did anything worth sharing.”

Joshua:  “Okay.  Then who did?”

PAGE 12.  PANEL 4.

Stephan raises his hand, he holds a beer with the other hand.

Joshua:  “Stephan, what have you got?”

Stephan:  “Giving Chino his tattoo.”

Abe:  “Aw c’mon, that’s not a good deed.  I gave you a cigarette earlier, can I count that.”

PAGE 12.  PANEL 5.

Joshua looks at Abe.

Joshua:  “Abraham.”

Abe:  “Sorry.”

Stephan:  “I’m being serious.  I remember watching Chino running around in a Flash t-shirt when we were little kids, and always talking about “Barry Allen,” this and “Wally West,” that.  He fucking loves the Flash.  I was so glad that I could freely give Chino a tattoo that meant something to him, as well as it being his first.  Plus he trusted me enough to give it to him.  That’s my good deed.”


PAGE 13.  PANEL 1.

Abe sits with his arms folded.

Abe:  “I still don’t think that counts.”

Joshua:  “Why?”

Abe:  “It’s not like he did anything, really.”

Joshua:  “Stephan, did you charge Chino?”

Stephan:  “No.”

PAGE 13.  PANEL 2.

Joshua looks at Chino.

Joshua:  “Chino, do you like your tattoo?”

Chino:  “I love it.”

Joshua:  “So Stephan freely gave away something to someone who really cherishes the gift.  How is this not a good deed?”

PAGE 13.  PANEL 3.

Stephan and Chino are high fiving each other. Abe has uncrossed his arms.  Joshua looks at him.  Chi raises his hand.

Abe:  “When you put it that way.”

Joshua:  “Do you have anything to share Abraham?”

Abe:  “Cough, cough.”

Chi:  “I do.”

Johsua:  “Mr. Chang, your good deed?”

PAGE 13.  PANEL 4.

Chi sits up straight.

Chi:  “Reverand Connor, I know I speak for all of us when I say how appreciative we all are that you have continually guided us, looked out for us, and kicked our asses when we needed it.  If it weren’t for this group I don’t know where most of us would be, well I know I’d be in jail with the way my dad is, but I’m glad I don’t have to think about that alternative.”

Frankie:  “Here here.”

Jousha:  “Thank you.  And your deed?”

Chi:  “I’m sober driver tonight”

Everyone:  “YEAH!”

PAGE 13.  PANEL 5.

Joshua hands Chi a soda can.

Joshua:  “Then drink this.  Boys, I’m glad we can meet like this.  When I first got here and met you all individually I could see that some of you just needed a helping hand.  Now, sometimes that hand has become a fist.”

Frankie:  “Right Abe.”

Abe:  “Shut up.”

Joshua:  “Mainly during boxing practice, but it becomes a fist so that I can hope to mold you into something better than you already are.  You all have infinite potential to be great people, and I don’t mean by making money or shite like that.  Just being good to your fellow man, that’s all I really hope you take from these meetings.


PAGE 14.  PANEL 1.

All the boys are out of the room, they have left.  Chi is standing by the door, looking back at Chino and Joshua.

Chi:  “Myung won’t be off for a bit.”

Chino:  “I know, thanks man.”

Chi:  “Have a good night guys.”

PAGE 14.  PANEL 2.

Chino and Joshua sit at the table across from each other.  Joshua and Chino are smoking.

Joshua:  “How come you didn’t want to share?”

Chino:  “It’s been happening again, more and more.”

Joshua:  “When?”

Chino:  “Honestly?  When I’m high.”

Joshua:  “FEI!”

PAGE 14.  PANEL 3.

Chino holds his head, looking down.

Chino:  “AHH, not so loud.  As loud as your voice is, the thought is even louder.  And come on, you only use my real name when you’re mad at me.  You don’t lecture all the other guys for getting high.  Shit, you can practically roll up Abe’s shirt and smoke it.”

Joshua:  “The other boys aren’t able to read people’s minds when they smoke weed.”

Chino:  “I know, I know.

Joshua:  “Fei…Chino, listen…”

PAGE 14.  PANEL 4.

Joshua knocks on the table, Chino is looking up.”

Joshua:  “…I’m not trying to lecture.  I’m just trying to help with something super fucking crazy.  What you’re doing, what you’re able to do, it’s never been recorded before in human history.  You could be the first…”

Chino:  “SUPERHERO!”

Joshua:  “No, you daft fool.  You could be the first person on this planet to actually make things better.  And it’s not goin to be by dressing up in some fuckin tights.  It’s going to be because you’re a good person whose learned how to use this loaded gun given to him.”


PAGE 15.  PANEL 1.

Chino looks confused.

Chino:  “I don’t know if I’m comfortable with that metaphor.”

Joshua:  “Guns aren’t bad, people are.  It’s teaching a person when to use a gun, what it’s for, and the potential power, both destructive and constructive, that it has.”

Chino:  “How’s a gun constructive?”

PAGE 15.  PANEL 2.

Joshua makes a finger gun.

Joshua:  “I point a gun at a man who is going to hurt someone else, I’m constructively trying to save them.  He’s trying to destroy them.”

Chino:  “I guess that works.”

Joshua:  “Have you told anybody?”

Chino:  “Still just you and Chi.”

Joshua:  “Have you been able to do anything else?”

PAGE 15.  PANEL 3.

Chino takes out a pocket knife.

Joshua:  “Do I like where this is going?”

Chino:  “You will.”

PAGE 15.  PANEL 4.

Chino cuts open his hand.

Chino:  “FUCK!  I thought the tattoo hurt.”

Joshua:  “Damn it boy, what are you doing?”

Chino:  “Hold on, you’ll see.”

PAGE 15.  PANEL 5 & 6.

Chino concentrates really hard, and then there is a smaller inset panel of his healing.

Joshua:  “BOLLOCKS!”

Chino:  “My tattoo was actually healed, just tender skin around it, so Frankie did kinda hurt me.  The dick.”

PAGE 16.  PANEL 1.

Chino and Joshua are standing outside, next to Joshua’s car.  Chino is kneeling down, like he is going to pick up the car.

Chino:  “Watch.”

Joshua:  “Now you’re just taking the piss. You’re like a hundred and thirty pounds, boy.”

Chino:  “NNNNNNNGGGGGHHHHHHHH”

PAGE 16.  PANEL 2.

Chino is standing all the way up, with the car now at his waist level.

Joshua:  “STREWTH!”

Chino:  “Maybe, nngghh, my powers also include making you say more Irish shit.”

Joshua:  “Fuck, put it down boy before ye hurt yourself.”

PAGE 16.  PANEL 3.

Joshua is lighting another cigarette.

Joshua:  “This is crazy, you’re a, you’re a…”

Chino:  “SUPERHERO!”

Joshua:  “I don’t know what you are, but it ain’t normal.

PAGE 16.  PANEL 4.

Chino looks hurt, Joshua goes into apology mode.

Joshua:  “Chino, I didn’t mean it that way, but what you can do, I’m just blown the fuck away.”

Chino:  “Not normal.  That scares me.  I’ve always had these weird experiences where I’m missing time, or like I’m floating, and there are all these faces and bodies around me, and I never know what happens.  Rev, what if I’m not human?”

Joshua:  “Bollocks to that, you’re human, and then some.  You’ve got a big heart kid and that’s why I’m not trying to have you locked up or anything.”

PAGE 16.  PANEL 5.

Chino looks at him.

Chino:  “Locked up?”

Joshau:  “Fei, if it were any other person that had this power I would be scared out of my wits.  But not you.  You’re a kind and gentle boy, I know that.  That’s why I’m not afraid, I’m excited for you.  FOR US. For humanity.  But I’m also scared shitless.”

Chino:  “Why?”

Joshua:  “What if there are others out there like you, who didn’t have that guidance, who aren’t so good.  What are they going to do with these abilities?”


PAGE 17.  PANEL 1.

There are young men and women strapped to hospital beds, doctors work on some, take blood from others, writing notes down clipboards.  We are seeing this from the perspective of someone trying to get up, someone who is dazed, who just woke up from a drugged up coma.  This person is walking towards the doctors.

Caption:  Unknown

The walking patient:  “Helllp….meeee….hellllp meeeeeee….”

PAGE 17.  PANEL 2. 

Two doctors turn their attention towards the patient and are walking towards it.

Doctor 1:  “This is not good, how did it break the restraints?”

Doctor 2:  “It’s that increased strength, some of them have lifted tanks, we need to come up with a stronger anesthetic.”

Walking patient:  “Not…right…should…not…be…here…”

PAGE 17.  PANEL 3.

Doctor one holds the patient, while Doctor holds up a syringe, and is checking it.

Doctor 1:  “You’re right where you need to be.  We’re going to make everything alright.”

Doctor 2:  “Hold it still.”

PAGE 17.  PANEL 4.

Doctor two injects the patient with the concoction.

Doctor 1:  “We must tell Minderbinder that we need stronger anesthetics.”

Doctor 2:  “Good luck trying to get that without him selling it to you.”

Doctor 1:  “What?  We already use all of these products by him, the syringes, that break very often so we have to buy more, the restraints, that aren’t strong enough to hold these kids, and his brand of aspirin that I take to get rid of the headaches I get thinking about it.”

Doctor 2:  “What’s good for him is good for us.”

PAGE 17.  PANEL 5.

The patients vision is very hazy now, the eyes are almost closed, the doctors still hover over.

Doctor 1:  “Don’t tell me you buy into that syndicate shit?”

Doctor 2:  “You don’t?  Wintergreen and Minderbinder are benign, but Blicero?  I’ll buy into anything he says.  I don’t think he’d like that sort of talk.”

PAGE 17.  PANEL 6.

The panel is completely black.

Doctor 2:  “Hello, Captain Blicero.”

Sound effect:  “BANG.”

Doctor 2:  “I told you he wouldn’t like that sort of talk.”


PAGE 18.  PANEL 1.

Joshua and Chino are back inside the church, sitting at the table.  Joshua hands Chino another beer.

Chino:  “Why do you do this sort of stuff for us?”

Joshua:  “What?”

Chino:  “Beer, cigarettes, you don’t care if we smoke weed.  What kind of holy man are you?”

PAGE 18.  PANEL 2.

Joshua smiles, he is smoking another cigarette, and has leaned back into a chair.  Instead of beer, he has a glass of Jameson’s whiskey.

Joshua:  “Do you believe in hell?”

Chino:  “I don’t know.”

Joshua:  “I don’t know either.  But what I do know is that if there is one, I think some old bastard with a beard has better things to send people there for than having some tobacco and a fucking pint.”

Chino:  “Or whiskey.”

PAGE 18.  PANEL 3.

Joshua lifts the glass to Chino, they cheers.

Joshua:  “Water of life.  Slainte.”

Chino:  “Do you remember when I first told you about what I could do.”

PAGE 18.  PANEL 4.

Flashback.  A younger Joshua is beating a person off panel, all we see of the person is the reverend’s clothing of the other man as Joshua pulls up on it, and the blood across Joshua’s face and clothing.  Joshua has a raised fist.  His clothing is different, just normal clothes, not the Reverend’s suit he wears now.

Joshua Caption:  “Aye.”

Chino  Caption:  “What did you think?”

Joshua Caption:  “That I’m glad you told me.”


PAGE 19.  PANEL 1.

Joshua is pouring himself another glass of whiskey.  Chino is taking a drink.

Joshua:  “Have you been able to focus it anymore?”

Chino:  “I try to imagine I’m reading a comic, and they’re thoughts appear in tiny bubbles, it’s one way I’ve tried to manage.  But it’s still really hard, especially because it’s stronger when I’m high.”

Joshua:  “Maybe you’re just more relaxed.  What was I thinking tonight?”

PAGE 19.  PANEL 2.

Flashback to all the boys sitting at the table.  Comic book thought bubbles appear above their heads.

Stephan’s thought:  “I hope they didn’t smoke the whole stash.”

Chi:  “Next week, next week.  Somebody else has to drive next week.”

Frankie:  “Jump kick, trip, then fireball, when he rolls back up, spin kick, then uppercut.”

Abe: “Tits.”

Joshua:  “Daisy gets off at midnight, I’ll meet up with her at her apartment.”

PAGE 19.  PANEL 3.

Chino looks at Joshua.

Chino:  “I thought priests were celibate?”

Joshua:  “That’s the Catholics, and look what happens to them when they try that shit.”

Chino: “Good point.”

PAGE 19.  PANEL 4.

Joshua rolls up Chino’s sleeve.

Joshua:  “So why that thing?”

Chino:  “Honestly?  Partly because the Flashes are really good guys, but it’s the weird shit that gets me.”

Joshua:  “Weird shit?”

PAGE 19.  PANEL 5.

Chino perks up.

Chino:  “Barry Allen was a superhero who went to different worlds, dimensions, travelled through time, and made it through all sorts of crazy transformations, and came back whole.  The fucker died and came back.  He’s just so fucking cool.”

Joshua:  “So why that?  You going to go time traveling?”

PAGE 19.  PANEL 6. 

Chino looks worried.

Joshua:  “What is it?”


PAGE 20.  PANEL 1.

Chino doesn’t look at Joshua.

Chino:  “Remember how I said I lose time and see weird shit?  Well, I’ve also seen, I think, into the future.”

Joshua:  “Fei, it’s okay, you were probably just, I don’t know, fucking tripping or something.”

PAGE 20.  PANEL 2.

Chino looks up. 

Chino:  “No, this time I was sober.  I was just laying awake, and thinking.  And all of a sudden…”

PAGE 20.  PANEL 3.

Myung is standing over Chino in a hotel room, Chino is in the fetal position on the bed.

Chino:  “No, I saw myself older, thinking crazy thoughts.  A dark presence, a man--on fire--and Myung.  One moment she’s there…”

PAGE 20.  PANEL 4.

We’re back at the church.  Chino holds his head.

Joshua:  “Then what?”

Chino:  “I don’t know.  She’s gone, or I’m gone, I don’t know.”

Joshua:  “Have you told her?”

Chino:  “NO!”

PAGE 20.  PANEL 5.

Chino looks at Joshua.

Chino:  “I don’t want her to be scared, she’s the only thing that matters to me and I don’t want her to run away from me.”

Joshua:  “That’s being selfish and you know it.  Fei you should…”

PAGE 20.  PANEL 6.

The door starts to open.  Both Chino and Joshua looks up.


PAGE 21.  SPLASH PAGE.

Myung is the focus of the page, showing her off, and Joshua and Chino looking at her.

Myung:  “Am I interrupting?”


THE END

NEXT ISSUE:  Trust Fall

46 & 2 Issue Zero

There is no Beginning or End
46 & 2 Issue 0
Writer Zachary Smith
Artist Kyle Smotherman
Created by Zachary Smith and Kyle Smotherman

Kyle, I always like to start out by addressing my artist first. Thank you so much for your cooperation. Depending on what you would like this book to look like will vary my art and how I want the color scheme and page layout to be. Do you want black and white, or would you want to do color? Personally I want color, but it is up to you. This issue will probably be the simplest yet most complicated book we do. Simple in the fact that there is not a lot of character interaction and only hints of the story being laid out, but very hard for the fact that we’re trying to make a book that can be read forwards and backwards. I think we’re both up to the challenge, so let’s not punk out. Remember render any panel stuff with the idea in mind that it’s going to be read both ways, and I made sure the dialogue could me mixed around so that it can be read either way. Chino is going to be addressing the audience pretty much the whole time, while still interacting with characters within the story. It does not matter where the background quotes fall, that can go on any page.

PAGE 1. PANEL 1.

This panel will be all black with only this text being displayed. Along with the footnote.

“Our planet is covered with geometrically constructed 'morpho genetic grids'. These grids extend from about 60 feet under the Earth's surface to about 60 miles above the Earth, arranged in geometric patterns. Each species has its own grid, which supports life, and connects the consciousness of its particular species. Before any species can come into existence or make an evolutionary step, a new grid must be completed. When a species becomes extinct, that particular species' grid dissolves.
A new grid was completed in 1989 - the 'Christ-consciousness' grid. This grid will allow humans to evolve into our next version. We'll develop two additional chromosomes for a total or 46 + 2.
The main change will be a shift to the "unity consciousness". Every cell in your body has its own consciousness and memory. You, the higher being that occupies your body, make the millions of different consciousnesses in your body work together as one being. How does this relate to this grid? Think of yourself as a cell and the grid as the higher being. We will still have individual consciousness, but will be united in the form of a higher being in order to work as one entity."


PAGE 2-PAGE 3

This is an end of the world party at a bar. December 21st 2012, about 1 minute to midnight. Show a bunch of people having a good time, drinking and dancing as well as sitting down, and also listening to the band.

Chino sits at the bar, he has a drink in front of him, a pack of cigarettes and a zippo sit on the bar. He has his hands on his head, looking down at the bar. There are all sorts of people sitting behind him, a band plays on a stage in the bar. His one bit of dialogue on this page is this:

Chino: “I get bored.”

What I would like to do is throw in all of those quotes throughout the issue, so let’s not cram all of them on this one page, because we’ll have a lot of pages to put them into.


PAGE 4. PANEL 1.

Chino is outside of the bar having a cigarette, he is already smoking it, no need to show him lighting it.

There is a clock somewhere on the panel showing that it’s 11:30 p.m., so this panel is a half hour before the other one.

Chino/Caption: “Do you know what’s fun about space-time? You can go anywhere in it.”

PAGE 4. PANEL 2.

A shot of space, with all sorts of galaxies swirling with it.

Chino/Caption: “I will break free from this, you’ll see.”


PAGE 5. PANEL 1.

Chino is driving in his car. His car clock says 11:00 p.m.

Chino/Caption: “32 paths, only one road behind you.”


PAGE 6. PANEL 1.

This is a couple months earlier. In fact it’s his birthday, October 4th, 2012.

Chino is eating sushi, Sophia is next to him. She looks at him as he talks to us.

Chino/Caption: “I can’t wait till you’re ready for what I’m going to show you.”

PAGE 6. PANEL 2.

Sophia looks at us and winks. Chino is pouring a beer.

Chino: “I like alcohol, it makes time travel easier.”

PAGE 7. PANEL 1.

Chino, Abe, Chi, Steph, and Frank are playing on stage for a packed house in a bar.

PAGE 7. PANEL 2.

A small panel showing a flyer for Chino’s band.

The flyer should read: “September 12th, 2012: the last show for our local heroes! Donkey Fucker LIVE.” There is a muted horn symbol.

Chino: “Creation is the ultimate act.”


PAGE 8. PANEL 1.

Chino is talking with his parents. They are at his Dad’s resturaunt, his parents sit at the counter while he is behind it. He holds a string with a bead on it. On a calendar it says August, 2012.

Chino: “Don’t let your perception be limited to three dimensions; it’s no fun that way.”


PAGE 9. PANEL 1.

Chino lays in bed at a hotel room. Myung is watching the door. The television is on. There are signs in the back ground that I want to mirror the eyes of the dark god from panel 4 on this page.

PAGE 9. PANEL 2.

This panel is side by side with the other one. The gutter splitting the two panels is the door that separates the hotel room from the hotel hallway. In the hallway in the second panel is the Man. He is walking towards the door. I want the hallway to look very white, white walls, white ceiling, white carpet, so that it mirrors the next panel.

Chino: “Beware big minds with small plans.”



PAGE 9. PANEL 3.

Chino sits in the Lotus position, in an all white panel.

Chino: “Watch out for the blank white wall, it will envelop you if you let it.”

PAGE 9. PANEL 4.

A pair of burning red eyes have plasma energy emitting from them, staring down at Chino from the opposite panel.

PAGE 10-11. Splash Page.

Montage of images for these two pages. I want the pages that mark the changes in the series, and in the characters to be separated by a two page splash page. The images should swirl and mix, and let you know a lot stuff is packed into these two pages.

Chino is on a date with Myung. They are laughing and having a good time with each other. Chino and Myung are watching a movie together. Chino and Myung are having sex. Talking to each other, having a drink together, hanging out with friends, having dinner, asleep together.

Chino: “Things are going to get strangely normal, and then it’s going to blow your synapses apart.”

PAGE 12. PANEL 1.

Chino punches through a wall.

PAGE 12. PANEL 2.

Chino is being shot at. What I want from this panel is basically bullets bouncing off him. This will reflect, for him, what will be the most bad ass part of the series. At this moment all of his personalities have aligned and he’s ready to tackle the world.

PAGE 12. PANEL 3.

A group of men in suits watch monitors, and one of them is smoking. All high military government official types.

Aarfy: “He’s out.”

Chino/Caption: “Beware small minds with big plans.”

PAGE 12. PANEL 4.

Chino punches a hole through a wall.

PAGE 13. PANEL 1, 2, 3, 4, 5.

Chino is sitting in his cell, he is freaking out, I want to see how well you can make this look like a TOOL video, as far as the freak out he’s going through is concerned. This is a key moment for Chino. He is unifying his personalities at this moment, I would like for each panel to have a tone, or palette, that makes it look visually different from the last one. Another good thing would be to show his face as he’s going through this.

PAGE 14. SPLASH PAGE.

Myung and Chino are driving in a car at night. They are approaching Area 51, behind them are military jeeps that are shooting at them.

Chino/Caption: “BOLLOCKS!”

PAGE 15. PANEL 1.

Chino is talking to Scorpio Israeli. Scorpio is stomping around his apartment. Chino is holding papers in his hand.

PAGE 15. PANEL 2.

A P.O.V. of the papers from Chino’s perspective.
In bold text at the top of the page it says the word: “CONTACT.”
Behind this first paper is another official looking paper that has the words in bold print: “PROJECT SEELE.”

PAGE 15. PANEL 3.

Scorpio is smoking a cigarette.

Scorpio: “This some fucked up shit those dogfuckers have come up with. I don’t envy you people being at the center of all this. You’re going to have to stop them.”

PAGE 16. PANEL 1.

The door to Israeli’s office has his name written in red paint to indicate blood.
It reads on the door: “Scorpio Israeli: Trying to spread the virus of truth to you worthless fucks and poison you all with it.”

PAGE 16. PANEL 2.

Chino is on his cell phone.

Chino/Caption: “Puzzle pieces all fit. Eventually.”

PAGE 17. PANEL 1.

Myung walks towards her front door. The panel gutter should be the door between panel 1 and 2.

PAGE 17. PANEL 2.

Chino stands on the other side of this door.

Chino/Caption: “Complication is a part of life that everyone will experience.”

PAGE 17. PANEL 3.

Chino is talking to Sophia outside a restaurant, which should have some Valentines day stuff hanging around, who is smiling. She holds his hand.

PAGE 17. PANEL 4.

Sophia kisses Chino on the cheek.

PAGE 18. PANEL 1.

The Man is pulling Chino up by his shirt with one arm, and uncocking the hammer with the other, but it can look like he might be cocking it (remember we’re fucking with the audience because this is going backwards), and is smiling. Chino is beaten and bloody.

PAGE 18. PANEL 2.

The Man is standing over Chino, with his guns drawn and pointing at Chino.

Chino: “I can’t fix you, I can only help you.”

PAGE 19. PANEL 1.

Chino (in Sophia’s body) is taking a pee in the bathroom. Hair is pulled back. She is wearing a Tori Amos t-shirt and jeans, and converse. I want her clothes to reflect a female Chino.




PAGE 19. PANEL 2.

Chino in Sophia’s body is looking in the mirror, s/he has pulled her hair back.

PAGE 19. PANEL 3.

Chino in Sophia’s body is on the balcony of his/her apartment, having a beer and a cigarette.

Chino/Caption: “Some things will never change, no matter what body you’re in.”

PAGE 20. PANEL 1.

Chino in Sophia’s body is having an orgasm from masturbating.

PAGE 20. PANEL 2.

Chino in Sophia’s body is in the process of masturbating.

PAGE 21. FULL PAGE.

Chino in Sophia’s body is checking her tampon for blood.

PAGE 22. FULL PAGE.

Chino in Sophia’s body is watching Chino walk out the door of the apartment.

Sophia in Chino’s body: “I’ll be back with it. Just don’t fuck mine up, and I’ll give yours the same courtesy.

PAGE 23. PANEL 1.

Chino is sitting in Scorpio’s office, along with Joshua Connor, the Preacher, and they are all having a drink and a cigarette.

PAGE 23. PANEL 2.

Chino and the Man in White are playing chess together

PAGE 23. PANEL 3.

Chino is reaching for his chess piece, but it looks like his hand is going to come out of the page.

Chino/Caption: “I’ll bleed into your world eventually, then you’ll never be able to get rid of us.”


PAGE 23. PANEL 4.

Chino is talking to Sophia, they are walking through a park, she is holding a walking stick. She is currently being inhabited by Wikki.


PAGE 24. PANEL 1.

Chino is at a bar drinking with Sophia, he looks back at Myung who is at a table behind him. Chino and Myung are not together at this point. She is on a date with her new boyfriend. Sophia is talking to someone next to her.

PAGE 24. PANEL 2.

Chino looks down at his beer. Sophia is talking to someone next to her, oblivious to Myung being behind them.

Chino/Caption: “Karma is physics: For every reaction, there is an equal and opposite reaction.”

PAGE 24. PANEL 3.

Chino takes a big swig off of his beer. Behind him Myung is taking her seat with her new boyfriend.

PAGE 25. PANEL 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, and 6.

I just want a bunch of random panels of Chino and Sophia inside apartments, at a restaurant, inside a bar, smoking weed in a park, going camping. In all of these panels there should be a few other people. They’re not very important characters, the only thing that should be noted is that they are the same age as Chino and Sophia, and they are like them. Maybe in the panel where they are smoking weed at a Park ( I was thinking you could make it that park you were telling me about it San Francisco) there will need to be one character that stands out, a Japanese kid, in a traditional Japanese school uniform (black jacket, white undershirt, and black pants, I’ll find you a picture).


PAGE 26. PANEL 1.

Chino and Sophia are driving, and holding hands.

PAGE 26. PANEL 2.

Chino is opening the car door for Sophia to get in.

PAGE 26. PANEL 3.

Chino is hanging up his cell phone.




PAGE 26 . PANEL 4.

Chino is leaving an apartment, its Myung’s, but we don’t know that yet.

PAGE 27. PANEL 1.

Chino is opening the door to the apartment from the inside so that he can leave. He is looking at Myung, who is drying her eyes.

PAGE 27. PANEL 2.

Chino is talking to Myung, who is crying. It would be cool it you could make this look like one of those old romance comics cover.

PAGE 27. PANEL 3.

Chino and Myung are arguing.

PAGE 27. PANEL 4.

Myung is ripping off a necklace.

PAGE 28. PANEL 1.

Chino, Myung, and Sophia are watching a movie together. Myung looks annoyed.

PAGE 28. PANEL 2.

Chino, Myung, and Sophia are at a bar. Myung is looking at her watch.

PAGE 28. PANEL 3.

Chino is on his cell phone, and laughing. He is in Myung’s apartment with Myung.

PAGE 28. PANEL 4.

Chino is introducing Sophia to Myung.

PAGE 29. PANEL 1.

Chino is shaking Sophia’s hand.

PAGE 29. PANEL 2.

Chino has now opened his eyes from meditating to see Sophia.

PAGE 29. PANEL 3.

Chino’s eyes open with shock.

PAGE 29. PANEL 4.

Chino is meditating under a tree, Sophia is walking up from the background.


PAGE 30. Whole Page.

A big map of California. I want a bunch of different areas of California having arrows being pointed towards them, to signify all the different places in California they will be going to. Do small vignettes to the right of the map. I’ll show you a really good example of a page from a Batman book that’s pretty much what I want.

Vignette 3: Chino and Myung are in a car driving towards L.A.

Vignette 4: Chino and Myung are at the beach with a bunch of other people.

Vignette 5: Chino and Myung are at Coachella.

Vignette 6: Chino and Myung are going down into Mexico.

PAGE 31. PANEL 1.

Chino is sleeping, he has a troubled look on his face.

PAGE 31. PANEL 2.

The god is talking to Chino in a white space, he holds a stick, it should look like a scepter that invokes such beings like Moses, and Odin. He has a big raven that sits on his shoulder.

He is holding a little orb with images of Chino’s future in it.

Chino/Caption: “Buddha, Jesus, Moses, Muhommad, all kick it together in the space.”

PAGE 31. PANEL 3.

Chino is in a white space, he is dreaming. In the far background there are a pair glowing red eyes. Closer to the foreground is a long black cape.




PAGE 32. PANEL 1.

Chino is smiling, he is having a cigarette, and a beer. Myung has checked her vagina, there is blood there.

PAGE 32. PANEL 2.

Chino is having sex with Myung, he has an aggressive look on his face, Myung has a painful look on hers.

PAGE 32. PANEL 3.

Chino holds his head.

PAGE 32. PANEL 4.

Chino walks past a junkie strung out and vomiting, and doesn’t pay attention to him at all.

PAGE 32. PANEL 5.

Myung is kissing his cheek, his expression is blank.

Chino/Caption: “Don’t look here for originality, it’s all been done before, this is just a new way of seeing it.”

PAGE 33. PANEL 1.

Chino is playing chess, and winning.

PAGE 33. PANEL 2.

Chino turns a cigarette away.

PAGE 33. PANEL 3.

Chino is removing his hand, the cut is healed.

PAGE 33. PANEL 4.

Chino is placing his hand over a cut of Myung’s.

PAGE 34-35. Two Page Spread.

At the center of the two pages is Chino sitting in a video game machine, that uses a V.R. helmet (there is a real tank video game for this, and I’ll find it for you). On the other side of the machine is the Man in white playing against him. Have these panels surrounding the center piece of them playing against each other.

PAGE 34-35. PANEL 1.

Chino is looking on the other side of the game machine, and there is not one there..

PAGE 34-35. PANEL 2.

Chino is taking off his his visor from tank game.

PAGE 34-35. PANEL 3.

On the other side of the tank game from Chino is the Man in White.

Man in White: “This is a good game, but be ready to play a much tougher one.”

PAGE 34-35. PANEL 4.

Chino’s avatar in the game is destroyed. His avatar name is WELTALL, and the color is blue.

PAGE 34-35. PANEL 5.

The game announces: “A new player has entered the game.”


PAGE 36. PANEL 1.

Chino is laying on his bed reading the comic Flex Mentallo. I want this view to be from above, he has a confused look on his face.

PAGE 36. PANEL 2.

Chino is on a operating table with a whole bunch of grey aliens around him, and all sorts of instruments strung up above the operating table. Make this look as creepy and tripped out as you can. You might want to look at some X-Files episodes.

PAGE 36. PANEL 3.

Chino is laying on his bed reading Flex Mentallo, this time we can see from his perspective and we see the lower panels page 1 from issue 1. I’ll send you a picture.
Dialogue Bubble: FLIGHT NUMBER 230 WILL BE BOARDING SHORTLY THROUGH THE K-9 DOORWAY.

PAGE 37. PANEL 1.

Chino and Myung are having sex.

PAGE 37. PANEL 2.

Chino is vomiting and having a seizure in a hospital bed. Myung is in the chair right next to him.

PAGE 37. PANEL 3.

Chino is riding in an ambulance, E.M.T.s are attending to him, and Myung is riding with him.

Chino/Caption: “Magic will make sense to everyone one day.”

PAGE 38-39. SPLASH PAGES.

Chino is at the Daft Punk concert, but it seems like reality is melting around him, aliens and, and images of other things are coming in. There are silvery blobs around, a Giant red orb that looks like an ovum is prominent in the cent of the panel. I want this to look like a psycadelic mental break down. You might want to put tears or cracks on the page to add to his actual break up. In the top left corner is a smaller inlayed panel of Chino puking up silvery looking material. In the lower right hand corner is an inlayed panel of him smoking D.M.T.

PAGE 40. SPLASH PAGE.

Chino, Myung, Chi, and Chino’s cousin Mala, are riding in a car on the way to Coachella. Mala is handing Chino the D.M.T. On the back of the car I would like it to say: “Future Class of ’06.” This Coachella trip is an early Graduation present for Chino and Chi.

PAGE 41. PANEL 1.

Chino, Chi, Frank, Steph, and Abe are all sitting around a table smoking weed. I would like for it to look like an aerial view of what 70’s Show circle looks like.

PAGE 41. PANEL 2.

Zoom in on the center of the table and there are Coachella tickets on the table.

PAGE 41. PANEL 3.

Everybody has just got done practicing, they are putting their instruments away.

Chino/Caption: “We’re all doing magic everyday, we just don’t know it yet.”



PAGE 42. PANEL 1.

Chino and Myung are having a cigarette with the Preacher and his girlfriend after church is let out.

PAGE 42. PANEL 2.

Chino and Myung are sitting in church, sitting next to his Mom. The Preacher is up at the altar (I’ll find you an image from PREACHER the series). From the side, which only the Preacher can see, his girlfriend is flashing him.

PAGE 42. PANEL 3.

Myung and Chino pull up to the church. Chino’s Mom is just pulling up as they get out of the car.


PAGE 43. PANEL 1.

Chino is having coffee with his Preacher.

Chino/Caption: “What is true is what you believe.”

PAGE 43. PANEL 2.

Chino is throwing up in the school bathroom.

PAGE 43. PANEL 3.

Chino is having a powerful headache in class. Abe is sitting behind Chino, and has put his hand on his shoulder with concern.

PAGE 44. PANEL 1.

Chino is getting a tattoo, we don’t see what it is yet. Steph is doing the tattoo in his garage.

PAGE 44. PANEL 2.

Chino has put down the comic, and is on his cell phone, he is calling Steph.

PAGE 44. PANEL 3.

Chino is at home reading a comic book, make it look like a Flash type character.

Chino/Caption: “I love superheroes, they can do anything.”
PAGE 45. PANEL 1.

Chino is younger here, around age 12-13. He is playing poker with his dad. Chino has a big stack of money, his dad has nothing.

PAGE 45. PANEL 2.

Chino’s dad takes a drag off a cigarette.

Dad: “I thought you said this was your first time playing.”

Chino: “It is.”

PAGE 46-47. Two Page Spread.

Chino is shown aging here from an infant to a six year old. Starting from the left side of the page he is around six. Chino is talking to his toy on one part of the page.

Chino: “There are times you will understand what I’m saying, and others you will eventually understand.”

Next section of the page I want to show his dad slamming the door as he walks out of the house. Chin’s Mom is crying. Chino is about four, he is watching television. The channels are changing, but Chino isn’t touching the remote.

Next section of the page Chino is about two years old, and he says: “I’ll be fine Mom.” His mother looks at him confused.

Mom: “Did you hear that?”


PAGE 48.

A baby is being born, this of course is Chino, but all I want shown is the doctor holding the baby after it was born.

Chino: “We’re about to begin a great journey together.”